electrical engineering

Introduction

Hi, my name is Thomas Vaillancourt. I am a student at Ahuntsic College in Electrical engineering. And welcome to my video. My program specializes in the automatisation and control part of engineering. Which means that I’m learning how to program huge machines in factory, how to install them, repair them and control them.

If, like me your not good in grammar and make a lot of errors and finds it embarrassing when it happens, then this is for you.

I am a French-speaking person and English is my second language. I know that I am not the best bilingual person I know, but I'm still pretty good. I am still in school but for your information...

I have been in this program since January 2024, and it’s soon gonna make 1 year that I’ve been in this program. And my grades go around the 85% and above.

Today I'm going to help you to solve your writing problem.

Take a seat in a quiet place and relax. This will only take a couple minutes so watch this to the end, if you like this video and want to see more don't forget to subscribe to stay tune. Now get ready to follow my explanations.

You are gonna be very surprised by how easy it's gonna be.

The Problem

The problem in our future career is the language barrier with our future employer and customer, because most of our job will require international capacity and we need to be able to communicate.

If we can't communicate properly international we might lose customers, then contract, we may lose reputation and in the worst case your actual job.

For example, if I need to communicate with another coworker about a project that we are working on via email, if it is full or error the others won't take me seriously or won't be able to understand.

It can be difficult but no worries because today I will show you the solution in the next minutes. Then, you are all gonna be able to solve this problem so easily.

The Quest

First, you will need to open a new tab. In your browser type this URL https://virtualwritingtutor.com and click enter. After that, you will see this page.

In the top of the box you will see every tool that you can use. We are mainly gonna use the first 2 buttons from the left corner but also the 6th one in the middle right.

The Solution

Now to solve your errors in your email you will need to copy and then paste your text in the box in the middle center of your screen. You can then click on the button check grammar on your right, and then scroll down, and you will see all of your errors underline, explain and suggestion for correction. You can also click on the 6th button "writing advice" and it will help you to make your text more persuasive or sophisticated and more. The first button on your left is called "improve writing" and gonna re-write your text using better words and end of sentences.

The Conclusion

So now when you need to write a professional email don't forget to use virtual writing tutor to check your errors and correct them. I said that I'd promised I would help you and so did I by my demonstration of today.

I hope this small video was useful to all of you because now I have a task for you all, if you enjoyed my explanation I need you to click the subscribe button and activate the bell of notification, so you won't miss any other tutorial and take a moment to share the video to everyone you think would need it. Thanks for watching.

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Total MP3 length: 00:00

Target structure count: 4

Error count: 4

Error density: 1%